Age/Gender: 22, Male
Location: Netherlands
Job: drummer
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This song has potential...As far as i'm concerned use more delay-ish effects (FL reverb, FL delay) especially on that main tune. Not bad but still not that good also :P
Author's Response:
Thank you, i made this a long time ago, but i would like to say, that i really rushed the end. Allthough i tend to spend more time with my stuff now ;) Yes, when i made this, i didn't know about the delay effects and so forth. I actually did good with what i knew though ;) Which was not much. Thank you for the reveiw.
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The bass sounds bit tinny use a little effect or something over it. (tip: long sliding arp basses allways sound pretty cool) I notice you made a little brassy layer into it with time offsets (i think by the sound of it XD) that sounds nice tho you could put the fruity reeverb effect over it for a bit fuller effect. Another thing i miss is some more percussion! Anything is fine (open hihats that kind of stuff) but not toms or bongos those things take too much attention and get too much on the foreground if you know what i mean. Anyway just keep experimenting with FL there's bound for something nice to turn up ;)
Author's Response:
Very good tips here! I actually just started learning using the slider for my latest song "peaceful wahwah", FL is just so good. Thank you for the reveiw :)
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Well no this is not heavy rave. The song doesn't really keep up the pase the 303 riff is also a bit too slow as far as i'm concerned, it's a pretty relaxing song actually that doesn't get on my nerves in a good way (unlike rave).
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The strings in the intro sound a bit tinny, tip: Use a big layer of about 6 different string presets and give them all a little unique time offset. The part after the intro sounds nice and misterious but what i'm missing is a big blasting wall of sound that should come at me. That little thing you use is really building tension but there's nothing coming. The bass sounds nice and stuff but there's no big bad sound coming to get me if you know what I mean.
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Riffs are a bit lame. Diversity is also missing as far as i'm concerned. Also check your channel settings the drums are a bit too up front.
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Sounds ok...could use some more diversity and originality. The effects are good I gotta note you could have exploited them better though, like using those deep booms before a complete silence and then picking up the beat again. I bet there's some flash artists out there who would really use this though. (I'm putting my audio stuffs up here at the moment so come check them out when they got through selection)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your time, i didn't want to add so much boom effects because the song was short so it didn't become plain. Thanks again i will check your songs out!
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If you seriously made this song then this is complete random crap. But if you didn't this would be an "allmost good" parody on electronic music.
Author's Response:
who else would make it? DUH!!!
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jeez ok you took the beep out...the lame melody is still there...this time there's a new thingy wich you should turn down! mix your channels with headphones for the most neutral sound over other people's speakers/headphones...a bass line...be more creative either way!!!
Author's Response:
shows middle finger, murmers fuck a monkey!
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Dude what the hell! the intro sounded tinny though full of possibilities and then that random beep pops in, take it out! the snare on the backbeat is sort of ok i guess but might confuse people who don't have a drummer's sence of rythem. The main melody is really lame change that also. I make music myself using FL studio so don't take this review as "that guy doesn't know sh*t about making music" because i do ;) hehe.
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Look don't take this the wrong way...volume tweaks and stutters are cool but only when the song is out of it's intro and well underway with a kick in it and all of that. Also sounds better if it splashes into something cool after the stutters. Sorry but this sounds pretty crappy.
Author's Response:
go away fag
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