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you sure you're a drummer? :P

allright well first of all that win tang guy needs to unclasp his ass a bit ffs that's being overcritical big time damn he's speaking as if you'd be applying for prague's symphony orchestra :P. Yes he's right it's sort of predictable but it sounds nice and for a drummer you're really great at finding melody lines (i'm a drummer myself, using FL studio too :P) damn i'm even getting a bit jealous of you haha well anyways keep this stuff up it sounded good!
minor bad things: the ending was a bit repetitive and the chords on the background should have been clearer I can hardly hear them through the static

itsameyayo responds:

Lol, I really screwed up the ending, I know, thanks for the heads up again, almost forgot, lol.

You're a drummer too? Dude, that's awesome, put a drum solo or something with your drumming on Newgrounds!

Anyways, WinTang was seriously trying to help, so be a little gracious to him, he's only trying to help, but sometimes, he comes across a little negative. He's still a pretty cool person.

Anyways, yeah, the creative part is 'cause my family is extremely artistic, so I got the musical part.

And yes, I'm a drummer, Listen to my first DnB track, it's got rhythm.

-Thanks for another wonderful review!

-SuperDrummer146

pretty good

Yeah this sounded pretty cool and i noticed that though you've used pretty standard stuff in this song and that you've been able to turn them into something pretty nice! I really think you've got potential for great songs, the way you can turn these samples into something interesting is pretty cool really! keep up the good work

itsameyayo responds:

I know I've got potential because, A.) I seriously believe that God has given me a talent for music, though I know I have to work at it, and B.) I've been learning so much about music in the past 3 years, but there's so much more out there. Yeah, I really wish I could change those synths around once in a while, but this is only on the Demo of FL Studios, so as soon as it's the full version, the songs will be better, since I'm not rushing anything.

Thanks for the honest review, it's really appreciated!

-SuperDrummer146

not too bad

The song starts off interesting with a nice sliding bassarp but the main tune sort of ruins it with it's tinny sound and being too present. I'm not saying it's bad just try to get your hands on sytrus or something ;) it gives the sound a lot more depth and dynamics. The buildups arn't too original though, but it's good that you do use them it gives songs just a little more general sound wich more people like.

itsameyayo responds:

Thanks for another honest review! Yeah, this was rushed as well, hence some problems still.

Sytrus, eh? I know about it, but I really have no idea how to use it, I'll look into that later, when I get Full FL Studios, of course ; )

-The buildups are meant to be that way, but when I get some more instruments, I'll be having some fun, lol.

Thanks for the review, it's really appreciated!

-SuperDrummer146

Nice but...

You may think i'm being annoying but frankly I don't care :P The song's pretty ok it's not bad it's not that great in my opinion also. I also noticed a pretty stupid flaw in your track and that is that you don't really mind the channels overloading the output I noticed it a lot of times with the piano, the kick and claps and the bass here and there. Use some compressors on it that should solve the problem. Overal not bad at all you did use some breakdowns and stuff I apreciate that since there should be at least one good one in almost any kind of electronic music song.

HouseMasta responds:

sorry i couldnt please you. i liked it and i made it for myself. i know there were a few problems, but meh.

Full of potential!

This song has potential...As far as i'm concerned use more delay-ish effects (FL reverb, FL delay) especially on that main tune. Not bad but still not that good also :P

Guitar-freak414 responds:

Thank you, i made this a long time ago, but i would like to say, that i really rushed the end. Allthough i tend to spend more time with my stuff now ;) Yes, when i made this, i didn't know about the delay effects and so forth. I actually did good with what i knew though ;) Which was not much. Thank you for the reveiw.

not too bad

The bass sounds bit tinny use a little effect or something over it. (tip: long sliding arp basses allways sound pretty cool) I notice you made a little brassy layer into it with time offsets (i think by the sound of it XD) that sounds nice tho you could put the fruity reeverb effect over it for a bit fuller effect. Another thing i miss is some more percussion! Anything is fine (open hihats that kind of stuff) but not toms or bongos those things take too much attention and get too much on the foreground if you know what i mean. Anyway just keep experimenting with FL there's bound for something nice to turn up ;)

Guitar-freak414 responds:

Very good tips here! I actually just started learning using the slider for my latest song "peaceful wahwah", FL is just so good. Thank you for the reveiw :)

a parody on techno?

If you seriously made this song then this is complete random crap. But if you didn't this would be an "allmost good" parody on electronic music.

Undergoingurge responds:

who else would make it? DUH!!!

lame....simply lame

jeez ok you took the beep out...the lame melody is still there...this time there's a new thingy wich you should turn down! mix your channels with headphones for the most neutral sound over other people's speakers/headphones...a bass line...be more creative either way!!!

Undergoingurge responds:

shows middle finger, murmers fuck a monkey!

nah

Look don't take this the wrong way...volume tweaks and stutters are cool but only when the song is out of it's intro and well underway with a kick in it and all of that. Also sounds better if it splashes into something cool after the stutters. Sorry but this sounds pretty crappy.

Undergoingurge responds:

go away fag

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