you sure you're a drummer? :P
allright well first of all that win tang guy needs to unclasp his ass a bit ffs that's being overcritical big time damn he's speaking as if you'd be applying for prague's symphony orchestra :P. Yes he's right it's sort of predictable but it sounds nice and for a drummer you're really great at finding melody lines (i'm a drummer myself, using FL studio too :P) damn i'm even getting a bit jealous of you haha well anyways keep this stuff up it sounded good!
minor bad things: the ending was a bit repetitive and the chords on the background should have been clearer I can hardly hear them through the static